Mr. Didricksen
11/3/2012 10:35:04 pm
Here you go, two new story starters. Make sure to tell the whole story, add some good details!
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Olivia
11/13/2012 09:02:55 am
Oh I will! There are two sides to the story. My side. " big deal. I met a kid named Emily from the past. She was 10. I sat on my bed and the closet door opened and..... " howdy! What is this?" " TV." " okay................. This." " a human. What are you an alin?" " what's an alien?" " be quiet." " wh..." " ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhyyyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeee nobody makes me mad!" I kicked her very hard. I called Diane. " hey....." " some Bob guy is at my house from..... 1700!" " shut up!" " I know ! He says he has a sister. Emily." " no!!
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Olivia
11/19/2012 02:26:16 am
" Bob......................." " What is.." " SHUT UP BOB! I'M NOT RUINING THE PAST!" " I live in the present Missy!" " Well........... TO ME IT'S THE PAST WO - ( I'm calling him a man too!) MAN!" " I am not a lady!" " Well I'm a kid! A 9 YEAR OLD!" I then called Gianna. " SOME UGLY DUDE IS AT MY HOUSE! ................ His name is........................ Fred!" " Oh no!"
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2/22/2013 07:26:54 am
Thank you Mr. D.
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2/22/2013 07:32:34 am
I'll give everybody a hint who /\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\ is. He's in 3rd grade. I'm
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2/22/2013 07:47:55 am
Every Friday I will post a mystery student that was a 1st grader last year. Wether they don't go to Lake In The Hills Elementary School anymore or not.
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2/22/2013 07:48:47 am
This is week 1.
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2/22/2013 08:39:08 am
Every 10 Fridays I'll post a third grader from this year.
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2/22/2013 09:13:19 am
Mr. D is the best teacher ever.
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2/22/2013 09:17:01 am
The very first mystery student is ...................................................
nate
3/30/2015 03:12:37 am
ok!
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john
11/9/2012 01:46:11 am
I stepped in the time machine teleport someware i don't no ware. but in space i haft to get out of hear.
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john
11/9/2012 01:49:15 am
i was with mr.d
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John
12/5/2012 09:07:55 am
why i don't no why because i was floating in space and i saw Earth!!!!!
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Adrian
11/9/2012 01:47:05 am
Uan dai uan gad stap in tu a taimasig and ed dug jam tu ta iar 1961.Ta gad sa jis grampa and jis gran madar dan jis grampa and jis gram madar dan dan da daimahing sat you gad 1 auar if da auar rans au af taim ai am coun tu lipiyu jiar.Pat ta gid darand uand tu lip picas ji uand tu stay tar uaft tar grampa and uaft jis gram madar
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Olivia
11/13/2012 09:03:49 am
Are you Spanish?
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Vince
11/9/2012 01:48:02 am
If I went in a time machine I will travel back to the 80s i will go to partys but its a good party. There will be games fighting, football, and baseball. I wanted max to fight me and I won. so he vs aiden. Max won. Then we played baseball. I got to pick the teams. So I picked max, dean, aiden, matt, and john.k zack got to pick his team and he picked jalen, hayden emma, and abby. vince,s team won. Then we played football Aiden go to pick his team so he picked vince, max adrian and abby. Jalen got to pick his team so he picked john emma morgan john.c and thats all. aiden, team won
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vincent ( still the story
11/9/2012 06:28:41 am
The score was 50 to 1 and when we played football my team won by 14 to 7 we got the winng touchdown aiden got it we were so happy we played madden 13 aiden was vsing me I won. Then we had cake. It was vanila cake and we had pizza the party end at 1.00 in the morning but it is still eight o clock. I wasnt even tiered then it was 9 o clock and we are still playing maden and there are the persons left at the party then it was 12 o clock the were stil three persons at the party. then it was one o clock everybody left and we all went to bed.
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Anonymous
11/9/2012 07:13:24 am
vincent
11/9/2012 09:37:02 pm
Then they came back and said were are the music tapes you were gadda give us. Ohh i forgot here you go. Thank you and they all went back to sleep.
aiden
11/9/2012 01:48:11 am
If I went into a time mashine it will take me to mars. I will have a
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Talea
11/9/2012 01:48:12 am
I saw a moster.I was scaer. I went the mall.The moster was gone. so I went to the store. I was haypp I was so haypp. I went to raed. The stoe was good so good.I went to my school.
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maddy
11/9/2012 01:48:24 am
I was draking lemnonnad and all of a sadan i hrad a big sond aaaaa and what came it was a tie mshing and i said cool and i said take me back
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morgan
11/9/2012 01:48:30 am
I saw a oger whith 4legs and 500 eyes the oger was orange and green he was eting he sed get out so I did I whent home I told my friends thay did't bolev me it is troo
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John
11/9/2012 01:49:29 am
I step and poof I fell and it tolk me to snaks bot I soll Zakk and he savd me yay. and he brong me to the kave plese don't het me.
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aiden
11/9/2012 05:06:36 am
I like your story vince
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Max
11/9/2012 05:31:12 am
If I walked into a time machine it would take me back to the 1980's.
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Max
11/16/2012 01:43:28 am
If I stepped in a time machine it would take me back to the 1980s.
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abby
11/16/2012 01:44:19 am
I was with my dad my brother and my mom at the ice cream shop and sudenly it started to rain so we bouhgt some ice cream and went home we had a time michine and we thought it was with the passed and then my dad and my brother with my mom went in the 100s cool its raining here to so the passed did do it so we went in space to see what was hapening up ther so we saw him god he was confused and the rain started so we waent back home and waent to sleep.
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camila
11/16/2012 01:47:26 am
i went to the planet Toys I didn't now why it was called planet toy I wanna see whats in that planet wow they have all the toys on earth i'm ganna get all of them but i'm ganna need a super large one hey you me? ya you over there wait are you stealing all those toys i'm not you did i didn't steal them then tell me why theres no more toys on planet earth! bye ya bye.
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Bridgit
11/16/2012 07:31:30 am
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Max
11/21/2012 07:17:33 am
If I stepped in a time machine it should take me back to the 1980's.
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Olivia
11/22/2012 02:06:32 am
How do you make a comment blank? ( Also, how do you whistle. My younger sister can, but............. I cant
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aiden
12/21/2012 08:10:58 am
If I stepped into a time machine it will take me to 1983 when
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Jeffrey
12/22/2012 10:49:19 am
I see President Lincoln. I said, "Hi President Lincoln. Can I be the President from now on?" He said, "No, you don't have a beard, so you can't be a president". "What about Barrack Obama," I asked. "Who is Barrack Obama," said President Lincoln. "Oh, I forgot we are in the '80s," I said. I am going somewhere else. "Taxi! Taxi!" Oh, I forgot they have carriages. "Oh, carriage, oh carriage! Oh, thank you kind sir." "You're welcome," said the carriage driver. He drove me to my time machine. Zap! "Oh Jeffrey, what should we do now," said the carriage guy. "I didn't realize you were with me," I screamed! I asked the carriage guy, "You want to walk to the White House?" "Sure," he said. Then we heard a soldier scream, "The British are coming, the British are coming!" "Come on! I'm British, too," I said. "You're British," asked the soldier. "AHHHHHHHH" 3,000 years later..."AHHHHHHHHH" screamed the soldier. "Come on, stop screaming already," I said. "You are under arrest," yelled the soldier. "Jeffrey, let's go back in the time machine. This guy is creepy," said the carriage driver. Zap! Oh, finally I was back home in the future. "Hey Jeffrey!" "Ahhhh! I didn't know you were there carriage driver," I said. Zap! I quickly dropped him back to the 80s and then I came home and went to bed.
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Logan Hanssler
2/22/2013 07:23:15 am
You stepped into the time machine and you turned the year to negative 19,453,781. You flew through the Victorians, through the Renaissance, through the Bronze Age, and through the Stone Age, until you were finally in the time of the Dinosaurs. You came out right as a Gigantasaurous was in your way! You needed to hide. So you ran into a cave. "OOGAA BOOOGGAAAAA RAAAAAAA!" A caveman yelled. BOOM! He banged his club. He ran to you. "BLAAGHGA!" He said as he slapped you on the back. "Hi."
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Logan Hanssler
2/22/2013 07:43:59 am
I will post the next half on the day with the date of
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mattheo
3/22/2013 02:43:30 am
lot of riting good
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Olivia
8/21/2013 07:30:52 am
HI LOGAN!!! :P
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natey
3/30/2015 03:18:21 am
how many words is that????
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Logan Hanssler
2/22/2013 09:01:15 am
Sorry for the grammar mistakes in the gigantic story and the unfinished word in the end. On 2-23-2013, I will restart that unfinished sentance, and write another piece of the story. I really
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2/22/2013 09:03:27 am
Hey Mr. D, when are you going to put more stories to finish?
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2/22/2013 09:18:25 am
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2/22/2013 09:20:39 am
Why did somebody write nothing and put no name?
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Adrian
3/22/2013 02:45:19 am
Aidan i laik ior stori and a kid naim Logan not the kit in our clas he rout allat.
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jeffrey
5/10/2013 02:46:15 am
I would see psy and scooter flying LOGAN and me said we like cheese and then me and logan and max and Aiden and psy and scooter and then we will have a random dance party!
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Aidan D
1/23/2015 12:08:22 am
if i sepped into a time machin i would probily go to poland were my moms mom /dad liv an then i would play with my REAL 4 wheeler an then i would make my new lago 4 wheeler ann i would go to the forest an rid my 4 wheeleer there .But first i would play with my 4 wheeler in the back yard.Because we have a big back yardso i can rid my 4 wheeler in the mud.After that i would play on my i pod an 20 more day`s 20 mor day`s later.'ok' now i could go back an play on my xbox one or 360 live.THE END.
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A.Z
1/23/2015 12:10:07 am
I steppted in the time machine and it send me into a show called wonder over yonder and that's my favorite show but the problem was I don't know how to get out of the show now how i'm I going to get home before my mom's delicious awesome tacos and chili oh how I love my mom's delicious awesome tacos and chili. Then wonder came and know were the time machine was but it was smashed in smitherrings oh know now what am I going to do and then sudenly me and wonder know how we can fix it and then we fix it and I was just in time for my mom's delicious awesome tacos and chili then me and wonder lived hapily ever after The End.
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michael
1/23/2015 12:11:21 am
i stepped into the time machine i wus in arcad i plad viteyowgams it wus fun plaing thue vityowgams and wen i wus don piaing them i got a buch ave ticits i got moare tokins i piad moare viteyowgams it wus fun i casht my tikit in i gote a bosh auv stuf i came out auv stuf wen i came bake to my hose i gote lods ouv stof i plad with all auv them.
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kendall
1/23/2015 12:16:00 am
it toke me bake in time. To dinusor time. Tere wer big dinusors and littl dinusors. Then my mama sede it was time to go. but I dont wont to go can I stay pppppppppppppppppppppplllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssssssss no then we went THE END. biy dinusors.
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Robby
1/23/2015 12:16:06 am
I steped in a time michine and I whent back to the first christmas. I saw God Jesus and marry I got to hold Jesus. It was awesome.We ate a delicios dinner we all prayed together.For dessert we ate apple pie.It was awesome after dessert opened presents.I was the only kid.I learned about heaven.After we learned about heaven we told a couple jokes.It was so much fun.I met so much people.Then I saw my mom and dad they came to learn to.They did not even know I was here they just fell inside the time michine.You should of been there.
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shane
3/2/2015 10:30:57 am
i steped in a michine gone to 2000 yares i saw big big dinorsr it was so big it ate a big dad i cant beleve that.
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aidan D
5/6/2015 03:52:27 am
i went to a time michine and i went to the futer 999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999
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Ava.z
5/6/2015 04:18:39 am
That's a short story Shane.
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aidan/safe
4/14/2015 04:24:14 am
if i steped into a time mashine i would go back5,000,000 YEARS i would slam the dinosouers head its body would braek in half
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