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hannah
11/9/2012 01:35:03 am
they fel in the wather and went rite in.Becase they did not wont to get wet when they got in.They had fishes on there head they rode back to.The ielenes and got in the car and went rite home.
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camila
11/9/2012 01:37:16 am
it was stuck in a waterfall oh no! how will we ever get out of here i'll save you were is that nois comeing from me were are you show your sellf my name is Camila and I have a pot so im not afraid of you okay if you say so ahhhhhhhhhhhh! a frog ahhhhhhh! bang! opps ah! was I dreaming oh okay good night hello ahhhhhhh! bang bang!
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jalyen
11/9/2012 01:39:14 am
It is lot of fish becuas we cech a .It canoe 9000 fish
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hannah
11/9/2012 01:45:42 am
they fel in the wather and the boet went rite back to the ielees with out them so they .Had to sowes ther.
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Gissell
11/9/2012 01:47:56 am
Dar was wan sapana taim dar was a grol wakin tu gr gaus alon en da naet. Hi fal en da gras hi scrim aaaaaaaaa .
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david
11/9/2012 01:48:48 am
one day i was plaing outsid with my brother we were playng ball then we went to sleep.
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Abby
11/9/2012 01:49:38 am
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kaitlyn
11/9/2012 01:49:48 am
We fell off the clif of the water fall then 1 minute later....SPLASH!!! we were in the river we swimed back to shore and got our canoe then 2 minutes later........we were at our house
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Emma
11/9/2012 01:50:25 am
We fell in the lake and swam to the canoe and got back in.We rowed to land and got out of are canoe. We went home. When we got home it was time to go to bed so we got in bed and went to sleep. The next day we went back to the lake with are canoe. We put the canoe in the lake and got in and went for a short ride.
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Olivia
11/11/2012 04:28:14 am
"WAH! WHAT THE HECK?" Under the lake was a beautiful door with 2 words on it: SHIMMERING SHELLS. " Listen Door. I've never seen a shimmering shell. Give me another 2 words. a new word came: NO. "Why?" I kicked the door and............. " AHH!" A big fat lady came out of the sky. " AHH! HI- YA!" I kicked the water as if I was a ninja. " Hiya! " " ?" " Olivia." "!" " It's me." "Who me?" " DZ." " Oooooooh you mean Diane!!!" " Umm.......... Yea! I'm the only 'Diane you know! " " Well DUH!" " Let's break the door." "Why?" " I want to." " Are you sure we won't get cursed?" " YES!" I took a hammer and threw it like lighting and the door. " Yoooooooooou arrrrrrre cuuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrsssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeedddddddddd!" " AH! HOW ARE WE GONNA BE CURSED!" " You'll SHRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINK!" "NO!" "Yes!" " WAH!" Diane was smaller than ever! " heeh! " "ahh!" " I DON'T HEAR YOU TINY FISH! " "no!" We kicked the door but our fins were bleeding. " TREASURE!" The curse was lifted and we went home.
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Olivia
11/13/2012 08:50:00 am
At least we thought it was lifted. " who are the new......... Fish! " I thought it wasn't me so I walked on. When I went in my classroom I sat down and........ " mrs. Stinger we need a fish tank . " " oh my . The new fish were in my class!" They put Diane and me in a bag. I hoped someone realized me and Diane! Brie walked over. " listen. I know it's you. I can fix this. You know the story nuts I wrote? With Jayda and I being nuts? With the wizard ? It's a non fiction story . It really happened. I stayed where I was. " " Do I have to go meet a wizard? " " this will start nuts 2. Revenge of squirrel. " " okay?" " we'll sorry! ". We went through the forest to acnut sized hole. Brie turned into a nut. " you can controll it?" "..........I guess...." We went inside. " ahh for it is Brie and umm....." " Olivia and Diane." Said Brie. POOF! " yay I'm back to normal!" " where are the fish?" Said Zak. " I don't know!" Brie , Diane , and I shared looks. " well........" We 3 laughed.
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logan D
1/23/2015 12:15:28 am
nic work
Olivia
11/13/2012 08:52:30 am
We'll sorry is supposed to be okay.
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Olivia
11/13/2012 08:54:11 am
Grr I pod! It's a nut sized hole! Not a acnut! Grr
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Olivia
11/13/2012 09:09:23 am
Is anyone Spanish in your class
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zakk
11/16/2012 01:46:41 am
zack hard shshshshshshs in the lake he said '' FISH MAN!'' scereaming like a girl but it wouls the teacher the teacher said deatenchen
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Emily
3/22/2013 02:44:46 am
I was on a lake in a conue i wasn't paying a tenchen and the conue fell over on a water fall aaaa help my mom and dad and my sisters were on a diferent conue i was in my conue with my uncl Tommy he is 34 years old. I miss my mommy and daddy and my nice sisters mom dad i'm in the woods aaaa bear aaaa clown, clown what is a clown doing in the woods dadadada woooop. Its funny butt we need to go bye mommy daddy Mia Ava we found you lets go home right after we run away from that bear run aaaaa.
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Mrs. H
3/22/2013 02:46:07 am
I like the part about the clown in the woods
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Max
4/18/2013 02:37:03 am
And I fell out of the canoo. And my dad dived to try to save me, but I was on land. My dad went on the other side of the lake. I swam over to the otherside and finally I found my dad.
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hannah
5/10/2013 02:46:39 am
they fell in the water so then the bout went right bake to the island and so they had to say there in till some one. Come and get them because they did not fill like swimming to the island because there lase hrat so that why. so then a people name Mr.d was going fish so he says to them "do you need a lifet" he said yes we do "hope in" thank you "your woruk" so they went back to the island and went to there car and went right to the beach.
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xoie
1/23/2015 12:09:04 am
it was a good day antil are bote tip over and are food got wet.then we walked to the serfis and we lefed the bote at the lake.
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sierra
1/23/2015 12:15:01 am
We were paddling on a beatiful lake in the woods when our canoe tipped over. I fell under the water I found my sister and swam to her. We didn't see our mom or dad. We were about to swim back to the surfece but then we saw it!! We swam to the sand as quick as our bodies could carry us. then we saw our mom and dad but it looked like they turned into Zombies! We ran and ran but then there was a dead end.We were worried but then the turned back to normal.Then we had a picnic. I had a toco and my sister had a sandwitch. My mom and dad had a salad. I had alot of fun even though my mom and dad turned into Zombies. Then we went into the water again and our canoe tipped over again. Not again!
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christian
4/28/2015 04:18:29 am
A prona came and bit us.OUCH!!!fuif its done.
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